It’s all about finding the right story

While applying to college can seem like a time-consuming and exhausting exercise, it is my experience that when students find an authentic story to tell that explains their beliefs, motivations and challenges, the writing is much easier, and they come away from the process with lasting insights about what makes them each unique.

The myth of what makes a story interesting (hint: it’s not necessarily hardship!)

Many students think they don’t have anything to say that is dramatic enough to stand out in a stack of college essays. But through the writing process, they discover that what’s happened to them matters less than the insights and self-awareness they’ve gained along the way. A well-written essay that captures a student’s genuine voice, feelings and perspective can be compelling and effective for college admissions, regardless of the topic.

Why an essay coach can help

It is extraordinarily difficult for anyone to stare at a blank page and tell his or her story, let alone a teenager worried about getting into college, so I aim to make it as easy as possible by being a sounding board and coach throughout the writing and editing process.

What makes my essay coaching process different

My first priority is to get to know my students and and what makes them “tick.” I do that by interviewing each student when we meet as a first step in beginning to identify the key elements that may go into his or her common app essay. If a student has written a first draft of an essay, I will want to see it before our first meeting, but I will spend most of our time just talking rather than giving any specific feedback on the draft.  I will provide a written summary after our first meeting so students have a record of our conversation that may be helpful in finding topic/story ideas.

 Following our first meeting, I will give next steps, such as brainstorming essay ideas, writing vignettes that could inform an essay, revising a current draft or creating a first draft. Each time I connect with my students, I will review my feedback and assign work to keep the process moving. We can meet in person, by phone or Google Hangouts to discuss feedback and problem solve next steps. In between meetings, I will provide written input and feedback on drafts using Google docs or MS Word.

A customized approach to helping each student capture his or her unique story

Each student will navigate this process differently, so there is no one approach that works for everyone. My commitment is to stay with my students for as long as needed. Some students will work with me to complete a solid draft of the common app essay and any supplemental essays and then do the ‘finish’ work on their own, while others will ask me to continue reviewing, proofing and polishing drafts up until final submission. I’ve had other students and parents reach out when a draft feels too flat or the writing process is just creating too much friction in the family (believe me, I get that!). I can jump in wherever a student is in the process and find a way to help him or her ‘land the plane.’ before the application deadline! Find out more about my essay coaching price structure here.

How I keep parent informed about progress

I keep parents informed about their students’ progress and highlight any challenges that may arise so we can problem solve as needed. Communication includes weekly email updates and bi-monthly phone check-ins.

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Testimonials

What students say...

“Victoria helped me a lot in making my essays flow smoother and be more specific, all while making sure it was still my own concepts and writing. She made herself available to meet in person or talk over the phone if I had questions about structure or wanted to bounce off some ideas. Victoria was a helpful and positive force in the darkness of the college application process.”

— student, Palo Alto CA

"I thought that the first session where we got to know each other was particularly helpful since it allowed you to better understand who I was and what I was trying to communicate through my writing. Instead of simply editing my essay, you also provided me with ways to improve my writing as well as allowing me to develop the skills and put them into practice on my own."

Student, San Mateo CA

 "Working with you was very useful for me mainly because I think having a non-friend or family member give you feedback is super helpful so you can get impartial suggestions and opinions. The edits and grammatical errors you corrected also made it easier for me to focus on the narrative rather than wording or grammar."

Student, Palo Alto CA

“Victoria provided essential guidance for the college essay writing process, from helping me shape my ideas to giving targeted advice for how to edit drafts and improve them with each iteration. She made a difficult process much easier for me and I got into one of my first choice schools, thanks in part to a well-crafted essay.”

— student, Bronxville NY

"I really appreciate all your insights on my draft college essay. Your notes have really helped me understand how to format my essay so that it better answers the prompt. Without you, I would not have known to focus more on myself instead of the story. I look forward to working with you in the future!"
- student, Oakland CA

"Victoria understood what I was trying to say in my essay draft, but also encouraged me to find a story that would go beyond the vague descriptions and really help colleges see who I am. I am so grateful for her support as I work to get my essay ready for submission this fall."
student, Annapolis Maryland

What parents say...

 Victoria did a great job of working with my daughter on her Common App essay. She brainstormed ideas; helped our daughter flesh out an initial draft; and then helped streamline the essay into a focussed piece of writing. It was great to avoid the potential perils of parental involvement in our daughter’s writing process. Having Victoria help out definitely took what could have been a challenging process and turned it into one that was smooth and relatively free of parent-child conflict!

Parent, Palo Alto CA

"Victoria saved us during one of the more stressful times a family endures - the college application process!  She provided essential support to our then high school senior that allowed him to craft an essay that expressed his experiences in a cogent yet compelling voice.  Victoria struck just the right tone that motivated our son, while coaching him to success and ultimately early entry to his #1 pick!"

- parents, Bronxville NY

Victoria's demeanor with the student is relaxed and low pressure, yet yields great results. Victoria provided an objective perspective that helped our daughter condense and express her thoughts so eloquently without altering or influencing the writing of her ideas.   Thanks Victoria! 

-parent, San Franciso Bay Area